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Your face is smooth
        like the edge of a freshly wiped blade

Your skin is warm
        like teardrops in a steel morgue

Your hands are soft
        like linen sheets over pale, cool remains

Your hair falls to your shoulders
        with the accuracy of a weighty noose

Your stride is as confident
        as a blood-spattered Gladiator

Your legs send my heart
        into a state of hysteria with an assassin's efficiency

Never have I wanted so badly
        something so fearsome
        so bone-chilling


                Now tell me, my darling,
                that you feel the same.
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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, that was intriguing.
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The best proposal ever.

This is really clever. I love the theme of love as deep as death, and I think your imagery is gorgeous.

<3
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*Marian-ette Oct 8, 2012  Student Writer
Gah! THANK you!! =)
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:iconstarkpretty:
:D you're very welcome, it was lovely!!
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~SoraIsMyHomeboy Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the recurring theme of death is beautiful and like the poem says, chilling
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*Marian-ette Oct 3, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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*Hfeather53 Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's sweet. =) In a creepy kinda way.
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*Marian-ette Sep 29, 2012  Student Writer
In a totally creepy way, agreed ;)
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~angeluchiha7 Sep 28, 2012  Student Artist
nice :)
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*Marian-ette Sep 28, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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